SL - Treatment for opening sequence

We have not yet decided on a title for our film but we have a number of possibilities:
Stream
Resentment
Spite

As we have chosen the genre of Teen Horror, our opening sequence will portray typical conventions of this genre. These conventions include love, jealousy, romance, hatred and betrayal.

The establishing shot of the film is set in girl#1s bedroom. She is infront of the mirror and behind her is a photograph of the 3 main characters (2 girls and one boy). The first image we see is an XCU of her bare lips taking up 2 thirds of the screen so that the picture behind her can be seen in the other third of the screen. Time is then compressed whilst she applies lipgloss to her lips. It then fades to black and gradually zooms out of the girls eye from the black pupil and stops when her eye fills the screen. Time is compressed again whilst she applies makeup to her eye. It fades to black again and then the same thing happens with the other eye and it then zooms into her eye right up to the pupil and the screen goes to black again. Throughout the application of the make-up the girls whole face is never seen and music is playing quietly in the background. The camera then slowly zooms out of girl#2s eye. Her make-up is smudged and her eyes are lifeless. We can hear faint breathing and the sound of the song that was played in girl#1s room playing from girl#2s ipod headphones. The camera zooms out slowly, the music getting fainter and breathing heavier. It becomes apparent to the audience that the girl is lying dead in the river, her clothes a mess and make-up down her face. She is soaked and covered in mud. A point of view shot is then used from a mysterious figure (the boy from the photograph) and a handycam is used as if he is looking at the girl through his eyes. The breathing is deep and heavy. It then pans round the boy 360degrees and then to the side of his face which is in shadow. It zooms into his eye and into the pupil and goes black. He then has a flashback which is in a noir style as it is black and white. The screen is split into 2. The image on the left is the boy and girl#1 arguing in a room. The image on the right is the boy and girl#2 together meeting up for a date looking extremely happy. During this flashback, undecided music is played. The flashback stops and the screen fades to black. There is a MLS of the girl in the river again from the boys POV and we hear the boy breathing. His breathing gets slower. He then brings his hands up to the camera as if he were putting them to his face and covering his eyes. The screen fades to black and we hear the boy breathing for a few seconds. It goes silent and the title and credits appear in green connoting jealousy.