Changes

We uploaded the footage from the montage that we shot and decided that it was not necessary for our plot and was not effective. We therefore decided not to use it. As stated previously, we also made the decision to re-shoot the river parts. The storyboard has completely changed now...
1. The montage at the beginning has been removed, although we have one part of the montage at the very beginning which is mud being washed down the sink.
2. We have different shots in the river location than before
3. The party scene has stayed the same and in the same order although it will not appear alltogether in the opening.
4. We will use the river scene and the boy will have many flashbacks which will be all the flashback footage in parts in each flashback in chronological order.



Here is a basic outline of our new storyboard...
MCU of plug hole with mud washing down
Fades to shot of the sun behind the clouds
Cuts to a jump cut of the boy walking
Pan up the river
See girls feet
Pans up the girl
Close up of her face
Close up of side of face
POV of girl from boy
MCU of boy closing eyes
FIRST FLASHBACK - walking to party
MCU of boy opening eyes and breathing heavily
MCU boy closes eyes again
SECOND FLASHBACK - walking into party
CU flash image of girl
THIRD FLASHBACK - flirting scene outside party
MCU of dead girls face
MCU of boys face
FOURTH FLASHBACK - MCU of girl#s face at party
POV from boy lifting up phone
XCU of phone with background picture of boyfriend and girlfriend, dials 999
MLS of boy on phone
'hello'
MCU of boy looking up at sky, camera pans up to sky
Glass smashes
Credits.

(This is just a rough outline of the new storyboard and I am sure it will change as we continue with the editing).